An attempt at discussing ocaps via the car key metaphor

I don't think it's working

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@@ -768,9 +768,29 @@ there is a lot we can make better.
 * How to build it
 ** Object capabilities (ocaps)
 
-So far we've spoken
+*** But really, what is the ocap paradigm, I'm confused
+
+So far we've spoken of object capabilities only at a high level.
+Regrettably, I'm going to continue that for this subsection, but I
+promise to get into the implementation details in the next section.
+For the moment, I'm going to continue the high-level, long-spun
+ocap introductory narrative of ocaps as car keys.
+
+We previously gave an example of object capabilities as being like a
+car key: possessing them is what gives you access, rather than who you
+are being what gives you access (the car doesn't need to scan your face;
+if you have the key, you can drive).
+Like a car key, you can also hand ocaps to other people and they can
+use them (delegation).
+
+[... continue with valet and revocation car key metaphors here?]
+
+*** Ocaps as capability URLs
+
+
+
+*** Ocaps as bearcaps
 
-# - 
 
 *** Ocaps meet ActivityPub objects/actors