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@@ -392,12 +392,16 @@ This will be a guiding principle for the rest of this document.
 
 ** Anti-solutions
 
-(Note that things in the anti-solutions category aren't necessarily
-"things that aren't useful", but rather "things that end up causing
-problems if they're the foundation".)
+In this section we discuss "solutions" that are, at least on their
+own, an insufficient foundation to solve the pressing problems this
+paper is trying to resolve.
+Some of these might be useful complementary tools, but are
+structurally insufficient to be the /foundation/ of our approach.
 
 *** Blocklists, allow-lists, and perimeter security
 
+
+
 *** Access Control Lists
 
 *** Content-centric filtering
@@ -410,7 +414,7 @@ problems if they're the foundation".)
 
 ** Must we boil the ocean?
 
-* Key concepts
+* How to build it
 ** Object capabilities (ocaps)
 
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